withrealtoads Fireblossom Friday: The Red Wheelbarrow
“So, your challenge is to write a new poem with the opening “So much depends upon….” and take it from there. That’s it! No haiku.”
So much depends on
a stitch, a nail, a link
as we rely on them
to do as they should
So much depends on
trust, a promise, a contract
to be what they pledge
and yet, you so readily fail.
Niiiiice!👍
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This is so direct and practical…concise work…wise words.
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Thanks Hannah
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Oh dear. Hate to use the overused word poignant but this is poignant. Thanks, Debi.
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Appreciate it, : )
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this is so truthful
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Ow. I didn’t see that coming, which made it all the more poignant.
–coal (Fireblossom)
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Thanks
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This just weaves fantastic images!
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Oh nicely done.. so true.
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Oh I guess in the end promises are like stitches came undone… life is all the mending of our seams.
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You drew an amazing comparison in the 2 parts of the poem.
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Well done!
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very nice.
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Oh, so true!
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Great things can be won or lost on the smallest of details, yes
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This is just pithy awesomeness, as sharp as the nail within.
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Thanks De
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So much depends on others meeting their obligations. But depending on 3rd parties can be most frustrating as they are not obliged to us!
Hank
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I like this message. It is clean and clear, yet poetic.
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Filled with truth…concise
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Well, we always rely on something…good as seems at that moment…who knows…life is mane editor…
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… a lovely write.
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So good. Promises, even contracts not kept.
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