The Old Screen Door

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dverse Poetics: Open a new door with me Lillian”s prompt

 

The old screen door is silent now
no kids running in and out,
no one to let it slam.
No one yelling about the flies
No one left to latch the door
while mother mops the kitchen floor.
No lights behind at night to draw
the moths straining against the wire
No more darning left to do on tears
where mosquitos dared to squeeze through.
There’s a special kind of music missing
from storm doors and security locks
the squeak and slam, the running feet
the yells of ‘back before supper’
to the chorus of daddy’s ‘damn door,
I’m going to remove that spring’
as mother flinches and shudders.

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31 responses to “The Old Screen Door

  1. …a special kind of music missing…..Your poem evokes the idea that doors have memories and if only they could share all that they’ve heard and seen.
    Wonderful take on the prompt. I’m smiling at the farmhouse porch furniture. Many years ago when we lived on a farm house on 15 acres of land in Iowa, we had white wicker furniture — there is something “fresh country” about it. 🙂

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  2. Debi, I simply love this.
    My favorite is the double play on words that happens here:
    “No more darning left to do on tears” — both tears in clothing, and the tears a child might shed. Ah, how motherhood changes through the years, and what we miss when some phases are gone.

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  3. Perfectly felt and conveyed. Yes, there is all kinds of music in this world – some very unlikely are the most missed.

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  4. I shudder when eventuality I will not hear it anymore ~ I love that special kind of music missing when the kids grow up ~

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  5. Debi we had a door just like that….how I hated the slamming of it and dad repairing the tears…..great reflection for me on my own childhood…beautifully done.

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  6. A special kind of music missing… this is such a beautiful line Debi, so many memories speak through our doors if only we stop and listen ❤

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  7. therisa

    Reading this poem, am reminded of the side screen door, at my oma and opa’s, that led to the backyard on their property. The old metal handle, which, a child could fit their entire hand around, after having to stand on their tiptoes, to reach it.. I won’t miss the bugs that manage to enter into house, during the hot Summer nights, I spent there, as a child.

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  8. Oh, beautiful! I love it! All those little memories , similar to those in most of us. What a good use of your memories. Too bad there are fewer “Be back before supper” calls, what with the threat of violence.

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  9. Oh how I love this. That old screen door. I’ve made it a point to always have one that is in shabby shape, slams throughout the neighborhood on its own deliverance, never painted but always dirty with the mucky fingerprints and stains of the past. Well done!

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  10. I love this. It has echoes of Maya Angelou.

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  11. You captured so much about those old screen does. My how they could slam! We have a screen door… but with a hydraulic piston instead of a spring, so not much for slamming.

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  12. I like that memory……screen door. Since I live in the high mountain desert of NM, we open the windows and doors, for air conditioning. I got some screen doors last year, to keep the flies out…I love them.

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  13. Awwee… your words brought a feeling of nostalgia. Poignant piece, Debi!

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  14. Glenn Buttkus

    Very Zen to share that inanimate objects have recall & absorbed memories. I wrote once about an ancient bristle cone pine that remembered Christ. I stand in line with sticker stars & kudos for this one; excellent. The doors on empty nests do quiet down as chicks fly off; but now, for us, the din has returned with a vengeance via 7 grandchildren.

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  15. Your wonderful poem brings to life the joy of family life.

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  16. This brought back so many memories, including my mother shouting not to slam the screen door! Loved this one, Debi.

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  17. Debi, this one really got to me–reminding me of the first (and dearest) home of my childhood. I forgot that I had written about that door several years ago in a poem called “The Summer of 1948.” Isn’t it great how so many of us who are a “little” older share this memory.

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  18. Really beautifully penned!

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  19. PSC

    Such a sweet, nostalgia in this poem, Debi, and yes: ‘There’s a special kind of music missing from storm doors and security locks’ — beautifully said!

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  20. Screen Doors of Love
    Swing by in rhymes of
    times gone by..
    Love within
    Sings a
    Song
    of missing
    Door sWings
    of Love
    stay
    within..
    just a new
    door to be found
    to Love even more..:)

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  21. A lovely poem – took me back in time- thanks for the journey…

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