I toss and turn, wrestle with cares and the black energy of the day, and then slip from bed pessimistic of sleep or peace. I walk to the front stoop, take a deep breath of stillness…and look up. I find the big dipper and tilt it for a refreshing sip of eternity. Let my eyes follow the stream of stars and gasp at one falling. I wonder if it is as curious of earth as I am of its world. Though I’m not sure I’d be brave enough to fall into its vastness. This fallen star, does it gasp with awe at green, growing things? Does it marvel at living creatures, flying, crawling, running, walking? Does it sigh a longing sigh to be part of such beauty as I long for the stars? I go back inside, to bed, with loose shoulders and calmed mind.
one blade of green grass
one brilliant shimmering star
marvels in between
There’s a sense of wonder and innocence to this piece that really touched me. I especially enjoyed the magical flourish of tipping back the big dipper to drink eternity from the stars. Just lovely. Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for your sweet comment
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“take a deep breath of stillness” — oh, yes, please. I shall take one, too. Thank you, Debi.
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Lovely poem and I really like your haiku
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Thanks
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What a marvelous sight to behold ~ Watching the night sky from my window relaxes me to sleep ~ A lovely haibun Debi ~
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Thanks, Grace
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Insomnia worsens for me as I age. I love the concept of /black energy of the day/ because I never thought of the day with an aura; yet what a great insight as some days are bloody red, others verdant peace, others gray drizzle.
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Yes, I hadn’t thought it through to that conclusion but you are right!
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A beautiful scene.. especially like the sipping from the tilted big dipper!
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What beautiful thoughts you have, Debi. This is a mesmerizing piece of writing.
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Thanks,Sarah
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A marvelous tale, Debi!
A sweet rendition!
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A beautiful dreamy piece to defy insomnia. Star gazing has to be the best pastime, I can’t remember when I last did that!
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It always fills me with awe.
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I think that going out and meet the stars has to be the best cure for insomnia… wonderful
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How wonderful to think that stars look down at us with equal fascination.
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Really wel done!
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I am an insomniac and often gaze at the stars, clouds permitting. This is such a wonderful haibun. “I find the big dipper and tilt it for a refreshing sip of eternity.” I wonder how it would taste? I like to think like the nectar I sip from the bottom tip of a honeysuckle. I absolutely adored this from start to finish. There is an innocence to it, yet there is the knowledge of the person who knows these stars so very well. The thoughts about wondering if they look at us the way we look at them. Absolutely wonderful.
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Thank you so much
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I join you in the world of insomnia and find that, in a way, it can be a gift. Something special can happen in the wee hours of the morning. You have expressed this so beautifully.
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Thank you, Victoria
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I love the sense of vastness you create. I love the “breath of stillness” and the sip of eternity. Very lovely.
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There’s something about looking up into the endless, eternal universe that can sometimes put insomnia in its place. I like the wonderment of what the falling star may think/or not of our world. Beautifully done.
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Star-gazing can mesmerize one without stress. In fact, it can be as relaxing as to encourage the will to sleep!
Hank
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Star-gazing can mesmerize one without stress. In fact, it can be as relaxing as to encourage the will to sleep!
Hank
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sMiLes.. for mE.. long
ago a giant oak
with spot liGhts
at bottom pointed
toward sky.. leaves
oF alive flow upward
downward sAMe for
a brief moment in break
from all stress work.. i AM
tree one WitH niGht.. tree later
felled by Hurricane Ivan iN then
WiNds oF FreeinG skY opens
uP cLouds oF Love never
seen in heaVens aBove..
and ah.. the stars no
longer covered
by branches oF
Love..
DarK iS liGht
IS A sTar
briGht MooNoN..:)
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“I find the big dipper and tilt it for a refreshing sip of eternity.” This is so enchanting! Your haiku is beautiful as well…to think of the marvels in between.
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I thoroughly enjoyed entering these moments with you, and the perfect, profound summing up in the haiku.
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Thank you
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