No Danger to Visitors

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imaginarygarden FASHION ME YOUR WORDS ~ a query Imagined By
“Fashion me a poem, using not more than 100 words, in the style of Emily’s ‘Answer July’, have fun”

Answer Heart –
Where is the love
Where is the heat
Where is the stay

Ah, said the head-
Where is the reason
Where is the sight
Where is the judgement
Answer Thee – me

No- said emotion –
Show me the thrill
Show me the waves
Show me the exquisite pain

Quibbled the pain –
Where is it buried
Where does it hide
Where does it stay
Here – said the grave.







7 thoughts on “No Danger to Visitors

  1. O Debi, perfect, written as if by an excellent protégé of Dickinson. The last stanza is the cream and cherry, to the city of Las Vegas, “Eat your heart out.” What goes stays.

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