dverse Open Link Night # 202 Posted by Bodhirose
Insidiously, silently, they worked in darkness
Burrowing, eating, until there was no hope
Still it took a long time until the damage
revealed itself in bare limbs and stripped bark
twigs and branches scattered on the ground
at the whim of every passing breath of wind.
And so, the tree was felled, cut into logs,
loaded into the back of a pick-up, then stored
for fire wood this winter.
In the dying it fed and in death warmed.
Life goes on. And should I curse the ash-borer
for doing what comes naturally? I pretend that
before the first bite a prayer was offered asking
the gods’ forgiveness for partaking of the tree’s life.
And I thanked the tree for its sacrifice of warmth
a provision of God’s forethought.
Is this maybe just to curb the queasiness
at our survival at another’s expense? And yet
it seems right in the end to be aware that
life is life and never take it for granted.
There is a hole, a void where the ash tree stood
and generations of birds, squirrels, will never
know the safety of its arms. I’ll never feel again
the comfort of its shade or the pleasure of
watching its swaying leaves in the breeze.
And its roots remain embedded in the soil
and the stump rises like a headstone. Here
stood a living thing. Be thankful.
Very powerful write! I especially like this line “In the dying it fed and in death warmed.” and the final stanza. That final stanza is contains unique and very effect imagery — the stump as the headstone. Always sad to see a tree felled.
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I like this line: “In the dying it fed and in death warmed” Stumps are like headstones, but some species sprout from their stumps.
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This really touched me, Debi.
‘And its roots remain embedded in the soil
and the stump rises like a headstone. Here
stood a living thing. Be thankful.’
That it was in your presence at all is gratifying.
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Thanks Sara
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So be it.
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I forgot to mention what a wonderful piece this is.
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Thank you ZQ : )
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We certainly are interdependent with our environment…I’m concerned about our two rows of ash trees (but borers must eat)!
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There are so many around here that are dying or have died. Sad
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Hard to “like”. Our trees do not show damage…yet
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The last stanza is so very sad. I hate it when trees die or are cut to use for other things. This poem touched me deeply. I have a few trees I hug and snuggle up to on a regular basis.
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I still wish Ents walked the world.
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So do I!!!!!
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: )
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Debi, this is a gorgeous poem. The stump as a headstone. Don’t think I can ever look at a stump as a stump again. So well done!
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Thank you, Sarah. I appreciate it.
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Yes, this is one of my favorites, so very spiritual, yet metaphoric too. I wonder how God feels about mosquitos who use us and animals as food ? Fleas are of the same ilk.
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This is a wonderful poem. One of your best ever. So many aspects of the tree, and we do grow fond of them I think…
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Thank you, Bjorn. I hated to see it go.
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What a beautiful poem. Indeed a stump is a headstone, but you’ve reminded us that the bones of death means that there was life, better that it was now that it is not.
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True. Thanks
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This is so powerful, Debi! Especially like; “In the dying it fed and in death warmed.”
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I have such an affinity with trees, your poem brought tears to my eyes, Debi. Coincidentally, my husband has been working on the trees and shrubs in our garden and, although I know some branches and whole trees have to go, I can’t bear it. I know that other creatures have to live too. We humans can’t criticise as we’re just like the ash borer, feeding off nature. I love the lines:
‘In the dying it fed and in death warmed’
and
‘…its roots remain embedded in the soil
and the stump rises like a headstone’.
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Thank you, Kim so much
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This poem is as inviting to read as it’s thought-provoking. I enjoyed it thoroughly. Nice work, Debi!
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Oh dear– these are such beautiful trees. Your poem is very poignant. Wonderful. Thanks. K
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Everything has a beginning and end and you illustrate the beauty of this so well, Debi. Even in its death the tree still gives…reminds me of that poem, “The Giving Tree” by Shel Silverstein. I love this poem and that ending is precisely perfect.
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Thank you
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This is a lesson that is so hard, though we see it every day, life begins and ends, and this is as it should be.
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A very moving and sad poem. Trees give so much, not only to wildlife and to us but also to other trees. I don’t know if you are familiar with Suzanne Simard’s theories about how trees communicate. She gives an interesting TED talk here: https://www.ted.com/talks/suzanne_simard_how_trees_talk_to_each_other
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I had heard about that. That is fascinating
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I have seen those trees barren with ash borer, being cut down ~ It’s sad to see them with just roots now, but I have too come to accept the cycle of life and death ~ Love your share Debi ~ Have a good weekend.
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Thank you, Grace
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