Bliss is This


Put a milky opal in a crepe de chine sky
scatter diamond chips to bedazzle the eye
mount it o’er a sea of chrysocolla blue
place two lovers walking, girl(me) boy (you)
then add just a sprinkle of late evening mist
an arm around the shoulder and a first kiss.

prompt at adashofsunny Let us walk together in the Moonlight by Sanaa Rizvi



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19 responses to “Bliss is This

  1. Your poem is bliss, Debi. For some reason, my brain was satisfied at the end of the 6th line. The last line (imo) might not be needed. >


  2. georginamorley

    You have painted a glorious masterpiece with your words 😀 XXX

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  3. Whistles!! Gosh Debi 😀 this is absolutely phenomenal! Such breathtaking images here in this poem, especially love ” a sea of chrysocolla blue..” Beautifully expressed. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support ❤❤

    Lots of love,

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  4. The way in which your poem builds such a stunning world around the speaker and subject is enchanting. I love the texture of the imagery, and the sweetness of the kiss. Just beautiful.


  5. THIS is utter bliss 🙂 So delightfully divine, Debi!!!

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  6. Aah, this is lovely. It feels like a soft, gentle sigh.


  7. Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    How sweet. Lovely image too

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  8. Oh my goodness, love this,,,so sweet,,,,and the photo is beautiful as well 🙂

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  9. Wow! You wowed me with this one Debi. From start to finish

    Thanks for dropping in to read mine

    Much love…


  10. What a beautiful concoction this is ❤ Loved the imagery… 🙂

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  11. that’s exactly the world in the eye of Love where every word is a rhythm…oh, so very lovely Debi…


  12. They are enjoying the lovely night, and then the first tender kiss…bliss! Wonderful! 🙂

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  13. Utterly delightful and so beautifully written.

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  14. Anything with opals is blissful 🙂


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